Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Briana's cool complex sentence:

Every night, in Briana's homework book that she does her maths questions in, she writes one complex sentence to help her with her writing, to make better sentences. When Briana got the class pamphlet for Term 3, it told her what she had to do for homework, so she set out a schedule with her dad, for her to do every night.
Her writing is getting better and her confidence in writing stories or poems is improving. Here is the complex sentence Briana wrote yesterday in class:
Rainbow's End is a fun-filled adventure theme park, with rides that will make your heart pump with excitement.

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